On the spooky Halloween night, Rachel and her friends knocked on every door in the deserted neighborhood. Giggling and sprinting from house to house, they didn’t even realize that they were the only children in the neighborhood. Suddenly, Rachel trips over the curb while running behind her friends, and twists her ankle while falling to the ground. Her friends never realized that she was left behind. They didn’t even hear her when she called out there names. Rachel was now stuck in a neighborhood with nobody she knew.
Wow very scary. Good work, next time you should go and add more describing words
I really like how you have put a lot of detail in your Halloween story you have really made me picture all that in my head.
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I really enjoyed reading your storey and it was very entrusting storey but at the same time your storey was very scary.